LOOSE PARTICIPLES
A participle or participial phrase is naturally referred
to the nearest nominative. If only one nominative is expressed it claims all
the participles that are not by the construction of the sentence otherwise
fixed. "John, working in the field all day and getting thirsty, drank from the
running stream." Here the participles working and getting clearly
refer to John. But in the sentence,—"Swept along by the mob I could not
save him," the participle as it were is lying around loose and may be taken to
refer to either the person speaking or to the person spoken about. It may mean
that I was swept along by the mob or the individual whom I tried to save was
swept along.
"Going into the store the roof fell" can be taken that it
was the roof which was going into the store when it fell. Of course the meaning
intended is that some person or persons were going into the store just as the
roof fell.
In all sentence construction with participles there should
be such clearness as to preclude all possibility of ambiguity. The participle
should be so placed that there can be no doubt as to the noun to which it
refers. Often it is advisable to supply such words as will make the meaning
obvious. |